初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；复杂句使用不错，但句法错误偏多；文中有较多拼写错误，请作者增加词汇量的积累；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

i think the eyes are our soul's window,and we use the eye to see the world that make us to know the beautiful flower,the quit animal,so i think we should know how to pertect our eyes,like use some ways that make our eyes comfortable,and look award the outside tree,green things,or outher things,