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i think the lie to me is my one of the favoritist movie.i like psychology,i like people use the tools to notice the other people's though,so when i found this movie ,i am so exectied.this movie make me so happy because in this movie,there have a lot of crimes were cathed by police.in this movie there have a scientist that people call him 'doctor lightman' because he can find everyone's soul when he watchs other people's face,every person have the expression ,in their face we can see the surprise,the fear,the lie or something alse,i think this man is my hero.