文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词;请注意分段。
i have a good friend.his name is zhu si,he is my class.we often go to school together.we have met since 1990.last week,we went to Changsha together.we visited Hunan museum,then we went to theatre.we saw a nice film.the play was very interesting.we arrived at home at 8 o'clock. i have not saw him long time.