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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
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TO:hubin@163.com Dear Mr.Hu: I am interested in your products NO 5670 of new product was exhibited in new york during period from Dec fifteen to twenty-two.If it is convenient to you ,Please send me a price list and instruction. Thanks for your cooperation.I wish we could establish business relationship in future. I look forward to your replying. Thanks! From:KPOHsaleshotmail.com
