七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中句子错误偏多了；文中用词稍显贫乏，单词拼写还要加强；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用。

sam got up at 6:00 in the morning yesterday,then he went to park by bike, he had very funny day in the park.he had lunch with his parents at MCDONALD'S,he played basketball with his classmatses in school from 4:00 to 6:00 at afternoon, after having dinner ,he went for a walk with his father,and his father bought him a CD,what a interesting day sam was