七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；句式变化不明显，另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. And then went to park by bike, he was happy in the park. He had lunch with his parents at the McDonakd's. In the afternoon, Sam and his schoolmate played basketball in the school, they played basketball form 4 o'clock till six o'colck. Sam and his father went for a walk after dinner, his father bought a classical music CD for him. Sam had a good time!