小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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When I was in primary school,I have a good friend, his name is Wang Ming, We are always playing together and we have lots of common hobbies. Every day ,after school we are going to the school playground and play basketball for long time untill both of us are tired. finallu we go back home hand by hand