2003年6月英语四级作文真题:描述你所见到的车祸情况

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Along with the advance of the society more and more problems are brought to our attention,one of which is traffic accident. We pay the high price for it. At the same time, it gives us a lesson. There is a case that impresses me. It was at august twenty-five 2013. It was in the front of shopping mall where the driver caused the death. When i saw the situation ,i was going out the center of shopping with variety of handful things. But i was frozened by it at that moment.