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Sam got up six o'clock last day. After he getting up, he had a big breakfast and rode to a park. He really had a good time. In the noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald's. It was so delicies and he ate a lot. In the afternoon, he played basketable with his friends at school. They start from 4 p.m. and finished at 6 p.m. He was very tired. And after dinner, Sam went for a walk with his father. His father bought him a CD. How interesting the day was!
