2009年6月英语四级作文真题:博物馆免费对外开放

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Nowdays. More and more museums have been free admited to the public with the government begin to develop the sprit civilization construction.Many people will benifit from the activity.According to statistic, The quantity of daily enter the Nanjing museum is 20,000 when Nanjing museums free admit.But there are many problems with free admission to museums, For example,There are many rubblish on the ground,People wait in line everywhere.It's so crowed that no one will not go to the place second time.In my opinion,Free admission to museums when the fundalmental is ferfect.The both can be benefit from it.