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Our monitor is Linda.She is 13 years old. She is tall.She is lovely. She is very kind to us.She always teaches us English.She likes reading all of the books.So she is very smart .She studies very hard. And she is good at sports. She runs fast. Last sports meeting she won first prize.She is our best friend .And she is our monitor.We all love her very much !