2013年考研英语作文预测话题：沟通的意义

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Please let us know the latest status of below certs. It’s passed more than four months since we have been submitted the S/N and shipyard information to you. I urgently need to get the certificate for Tongfang Jiangxin shipbuilding Co., Ltd. The vessel will be delivered in 2/12/2013. For this gen-set certificates, we met with customer complaints many times, could you help to push it again, and send me electrical version within this week. And give me a time when could I received the original certificate.