2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

作者学术词汇积累做的很棒，但总体词汇量偏小；简单句比重稍微偏高，注意极个别句子错误；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织；可以适当增加副词的使用；连词使用偏少；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

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