加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中拼写错误比较多,同时请注意积累词汇量;语言不流畅;请注意分段;连词使用偏少。
Our monitor is a beautiful girl .Her name is ras. She is tall and thin.She hae long hair and two big eyes.She alawys wears a glasses.She is 14 years old.She does her work very hard.She alawys wears some beautiful clothes.She favourite sport is table tennis.I love she because she is friendly.