湖北洪湖市2012-2013学年七年级上学期期中考试英语作文及范文:我的班长

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Our monitor is a beautiful girl.Her name is ras. She is tall and thin.She has long hair and two beautiful eyes.She always wears a pair of glasses.She is 14 years old.She does her work very hard.She alawys wears some beautiful clothes.She favourite sport is table tennis.I love she because she is friendly.