七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，可是单词拼写做的不错；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

Sam wake up at six o'clock yesterday morning, then he ride a bycicle to part, he had a good fun in the park. He and his parents have a lunch at McDonald's noon.On afternoon he played basketball with his classmate at school, till 4 o'clock. After lunch, Sam and his father went for a walk, his father had bought a classical CD for him. it is a fun day for Sam.