初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；作者词汇量有些小，要注意检查拼写错误；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。

How to pretect ours eyes when you read books or read newspaper, you'd better sit on the sofa or a chair. if you feel that your eyes is tired you can see farther view. Don't do the same thing all the day , you need change direction, it makes your eyes freshly. if you have time you may do eyes excise.