七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

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Sam got up at six o'clock yesterday. Then he drave his bicycle to park, he enjoyed himself there. When it was noon, he had lunch with his parents at McDonald' s. After that sam played basketball with jis classmates from 4pm till 6pm. And after dinner, he went for a walk with his farther while his farther bought a classic music CD to him. What a wonderful day Sam had.