单词拼写做的很好,请注意积累词汇量;从句不足,简单句比重高;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Every day,tom is getting up at 6:00.. He is go to school at 6:15. his' mother said he don't eat outside. He don't listen to music on school days. he don't watch TV on school nights. He must back home by 12:00 in the morning and by 9:20 in the evening.