初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

文中词汇表达不够丰富，要多积累学术词汇；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；连接词过少，建议增加衔接词汇的积累；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。

We must to reduce sitting in computer's time. we can always see the green tree when our eyes were ache. We must to reduced sitting in computer's time. we can always see the green tree when our eyes were ache. We must to reduced sitting in computer's time. we can always see the green tree when our eyes were ache. We must to reduced sitting in computer's time. we can always see the green tree when our eyes were ache.