初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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our eyes were very important. How TO protect our eyes? First,we must to reduce sitting in the computer's time.Then,we can see the beautiful scenery outside the window.we can make the eye exercises at the free time.It can more good to protect our eyes. At last， we can tell you families and you friends protect eyes at the life.