七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文章用词太过单一，且单词拼写错误较多；层次不够清晰，文中很少使用衔接词；连词使用偏少；可以适当增加副词的使用；请注意分段。

sam got up at six o'clock yesterday.he went to park by bike,he had a lot of fun. he had launch with his parents in tne McDonald's.sam played basketball with his claeese untill 6pm in the afternoon.after dinner,he go for a walk with his dad,dad bought a classic CD for him.what was intersting day!