2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(31):助人为乐

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Once upon a time,I was wandering in the street while I saw an old man suddenly fell on the ground.Without hazitation,I walked to him and tried to pulled him off.Rushing to the hospital,I felf relief for save the man's life,who got a stroke while he was alone on a street.Having knew this,his son thanked me deeply for my quick reaction and kindness.My heart was full of happiness not only because of my kind movement,but also for I get to know it was strangers' care that matters.