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A couple days ago,some students with I attended a summer camp.what made things different is that some British middle school students joined this activity.They came from Canvey,a city which is to the east of London,beside the Thames.Then we visited a lot of places of interest in Beijing,such as the Forbidden Palace,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace etc.From the impressing activities we have gained a lot.
