2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(35):summer camp

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A couple of days ago,some students with I attended a summer camp.What made things different is that some middle school students took part in this activity.They came from Canvey,a city which is to the east of London,beside the Thames.Then we visited a lot of places of interest in Beijing,such as the Forbidden Palace,the Great Wall and the Summer Palace etc.From the impressing activities we have gained a lot.