2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(35):summer camp

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A couple of days ago, some students with I attended a summer camp.What made things different is that some middle school students took part in this activity.They came from Canvey, a city which is to the east of London, beside the Thames.Then we visited a lot of places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden Palace, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,etc.From this activities we have gained a lot.