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A couple of days ago, some students and I attended a summer camp.What made this camp different is that some English middle school students came from Canvey, a city which is to the east of London,lying on the Thames,took part in our activity.Besides we visited a great deal of places of interest in Beijing, such as the Forbidden Palace, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace,etc.From this activities we have gained a lot.
