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作者词汇表达较为熟练，学术词汇使用不是很多；句法知识很棒，若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更出色；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。
During the holiday I took part in a special summer camp with my classmates. There we made some new friends. They were senior students from Canvey, a town on the Themes, which is to the east of London. As hosts, we showed them round many places of interest in Beijing, such as the Palace Museum, the Great Wall and the Summer Palace and told them about the changes that have taken place in Beijing. And they said Beijing was quite different from what they had heard of and it was very beautiful. Meanwhile, we improved our spoken English with their help. I think the summer camp is very valuable.
