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文章结构清晰，有效地采用了多种衔接方法；作者在句法层面做的很棒；文中能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇，但词汇表达多样性不高，拼写检查还需加强；请注意分段。
Yudan,a famous specialist serving in Beijing University,was invited to give a lecture in our school.What's more,she managed to make Chinese electic tradional culture known to us all by the lecture she gave on CCTV,and was loved by people due to her humorous expressing.Influenced by her father,she was crazy abou Chinese traditiongal culture when she was young.In addition,she not only give a excellent letcure during her class,but also a high-productive writer who has published a lot of books.
