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拼写做的很棒，在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；作者在句法层面做的很棒；衔接成分很少出现，文章结构欠严谨；请注意分段；连词使用偏少。
Yudan,a famous specialist serving in Beijing University,was invited to give a lecture in our school.What's more,she managed to make Chinese traditional culture known to us all by the lecture she gave on CCTV,and was loved by people for her humor.Influenced by her father,she was crazy about Chinese traditional culture when she was young.In addition,she not only give an excellent lecture during her class,but also is a high-productive writer who has published a lot of books.
