拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;全文结构较为严谨;请注意分段。
Yu Dan, a famous professor in Beijing Normal University, has already given millions of Chinese lots of wonderful lectures on CCTV. In this special way she introduces traditional Chinese literature to make it more popular. She is so humorous that many people admire her and become her fans. Influenced by her father, she began to enjoy Chinese literature when she was a child. Now as a teacher, not only does she have rich teaching experience to instruct all her students, but also she has published many books. She is considered to be an excellent teacher, a great lecturer and a successful writer.