2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29): Make it

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The same clay,someone use it to built a worthless vase,while someone keep it still.It's a fact that we can't choose what we are given,but we can try our best to make good use of it.This reminds me of LiuWei,who lost his arm in an accident.But he did't give himself up,on the country,he managed to use his feet to have meals,brash his teeth,get changed,and even do well in playing the piano.Being spotted,he play a song You Are Beautiful which succeeded in moving everyone.In conclution,we should not complaint about what we are given,If we can make it inot what we expect.