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2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29): Make it

发布时间:2014-08-29 18:09浏览次数:455
要求:
You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.
注意:
(1)根据以上提示,结合事例写一篇文章,120字左右。
(2)语义连贯、条理清晰、详略得当。
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,复杂句的比例可适当提高;文中使用了简单的连接词和过渡词;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

With the same clay,someone uses it to build a worthless vase,while someone keeps it still.It's a fact that we can't choose what we are given,but we can try our best to make good use of it.This reminds me of LiuWei,who lost his arm in an accident.Not giving himself up,on the contrary,he managed to use his feet to have meals,brash his teeth,get changed,and even do well in playing the piano.Being spotted,he played a song named You Are Beautiful,which succeeded in moving everyone. In conclusion,we should not complaint about what we are given,If we can make it into what we expect.

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