2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(29): Make it

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“Two men looked out from prison bars, one saw the mud, the other saw stars.” When deprived of the opportunities to choose, most people tend to wait and surrender at the mercy of fate, while the few make the most of what they have, which makes all the difference between a wise and a fool. Helen Keller was not defeated by the heavy blow of blindness and deafness that life delivered to her. Moreover, she inspired millions of people with her great masterpieces, among which Three Days to See is most familiar to us. Her life story served as a model for the rest of us to follow whenever life seems unfair and cruel to us. Remember, when fate hands us a lemon, let’s try to make a lemonade!