七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，但单词拼写做的很棒；若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；可以适当增加副词的使用。

Yesterday,Sam got up at six o'clock.Then he went to the park by bike.He enjoyed himself at the park.At noon, He had lunch with his parents at McDonald's .At afternoon,he played basketball with his classmates at school from 4 o'clock till 6 o'clock.After dinner,he went for a walk with father,and father bought a classical music CD for him.What a funny day Sam had!