初一英语作文模拟题:保护眼睛

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eyes are very important for us.so we must protect our eyes everyday. how can we protect our eyes? first, we should use our eyes scientificly. when we read books we should keep some distances from eye to books. we need to have a rest about reading thirty minutes. what's more, we'd better don't read books lying in the bed.second, when we use electic products, we'd better keep the screem dark.