文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
Sam got up at 6 o'clock yesterday morning. After that he rode his bike to the park. In the park he had a great fun playing. At noon, he had lunch in McDonald's with his parents. In the afternoon, he played basketball from four to six with his classmates. It was relaxing. After dinner, he went for a walk with his father. His father bought a classical music CD for him. He was very happy because he loved music very much. What a happy day Sam had!