七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度，且检查文中的拼写错误；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Yesterday,Sam got up at six o'clock,and then he rided his bike to zoo and had a good time there.He and his parents had a lunch at McDonald's .In the afternoon,sam and his classmates was playing basketball from four untill six .After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father together,and then his father bought a classic CD for him.What a intersting day Sam had!