七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

可适当增加从句的使用，注意文中的一些小错误；作者词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

Yesterday,Sam got up at six o'clock,and then he rid his bike to the zoo enjoying a good time there.He and his parents had lunch at McDonald's .In the afternoon,sam and his classmates was playing basketball from four untill six .After dinner ,Sam went for a walk with his father together,and then his father bought a classic CD for him.What a intersting day Sam had!