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七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文:有趣的一天

发布时间:2013-06-19 16:11浏览次数:17682
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Sam昨天六点钟起床。然后骑自行车去公园,他在公园玩得很开心。中午和父母在麦当劳(McDonald’s)吃午饭。下午Sam和他的同学在学校打篮球,从下午四点一直打到(till)下午六点。晚饭后,Sam和父亲一起散步(go for a walk),父亲给他买了一张古典音乐CD。这一天Sam过得多么有趣啊!
用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中有几处句子错误;单词拼写很棒,可考虑增加学术词汇的使用量。

用户练习作文:

how time flies,i have been in Shenzhen for almost 10years,i can still remember the day when i came here.i was so young but i was hopeful and imaginative about my future Although it was not suitable for young us to end school life and enter society,I spend a very happy time of the begging of my working life.as most of my classmates were recommended to the same company. After half a year,most of my classmates gradually left that company and to seek more suitable job,now ten years past,we still keep in touch.some of the classmates have settled down here,some have gone back to hometown. For me,I still can't adjust to the fast pace of city life,the hustle and bustle is really difficult to handle, I work extremely hard and try one best to adapt to the lifestyle here,but I don't feel any sense of belonging here,Perhaps It's time to stop floating and go back to where I belong,maybe I'll feel much better with my family around

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