简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;作者词汇量有些小,要注意检查拼写错误;文章结构欠严谨,基本没有衔接成分。
Sam get up at 6 o'clock yesterday, and go to park by bicycle ,he have happy time ,he have lunch in mc donald's .Sam play blackball in the school with his classmate .from 4clock to 6.after dinner , he go for a walk with his father ,his father buy a muise to him ,how funny today