七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

若加重从句在文中的比例，文章会很棒；上下文衔接欠佳，文章层次欠清晰，建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累；文中词汇表达不够丰富，且有较多拼写错误。

sam got up at six o'clock yesterday,then ,he went go the garden by bick,he enjoyed himslfe in the garden, at noon,he eated lunch in mc donald's with him parents , in the afternoon sam played basketball with him classmeter in school, they played from four o'clock till six o'clock, after dinner sam went for a walk with his father, his father bought a classic micek cd, have a good day,