句式变化不明显,另外要多多加强从句在文中的比例;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
Tom's rules Tom usually gets up at six o'clock, he always goes to schoo at a quarter past six. he never eat anything outside he don't listen to music on school days he don't watch TV on school nights he always come home at 12:00 in the morning in the evening he come home at 9:20