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Science Fiction movie is a kind of movie my favorite. last week I went to the cinema to see a film neam "mars" with my husband. the film is a story take place five hundreds years in the future. one astronaut neam joe was losed for his colleague on mars . he planted the potato to keep him life. at last he was Rescued,