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现在你的家乡是什么季节？天气怎么样？人们在这样的天气里都干什么？根据提示写一篇介绍你们家乡天气的短文。
winter, windy and cold, wear coats and scarves, in restaurants, in the park， have a good time
行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；注意句式在文中的变化，加强一些从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写。
it is winter,the weather is windy and cold, we ofte wear coats and scarvers in winter. Chafing dish is the most popular food .in restaurants many people eat the food around the stove. Ice is a funny thing .in the park ,many different ice was made, lot of peopel visited at evening, have a good time.
