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I got up at half past six o'clock ,I went to work at ten to seven o'clock.I spended a half hour to arrive our office。There were a lot of people in subway. I usually are busy at monday morning. We often have a meeting at ten o'clock. We eated lunch in a rastaurant near our office at noon, in the afternoon,I typed letters in my office. I comed home at half past five I watched TV in living room with my husband in evening, we went to bed at ten