句法知识较好,但需加强句式变化;文章层次不够分明,缺少组织,需注意文章整体的组织结构;作者词汇表达的灵活性要加强,且注意拼写错误。
Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning.then ride bike to park play is fun.at the nonn wiht parents going to McDonald's eat lunch.afternoon Sam wiht his classmate playing basketball at the school,from four PM till six PM.at after drinner,Sam with father go for a walk,fathe give he buy a classical CD.the day Sam with is fun.