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Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning.then go to the park by bike,play is fun.at the nonn wiht parents going to McDonald's eat lunch.afternoon Sam wiht his classmate playing basketball at the school,from four PM till six PM.at after drinner,Sam with father go for a walk,fathe give he buy a classical CD.the day Sam with is fun.