七年级英语下册 Unit10 单元 测试卷写作范文：有趣的一天

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达不够丰富，同时请仔细检查词汇的拼写；没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。

Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning.Then go to the park by bike,have fun in the park.At noon and parents to eat lunch at McDonald's.In the afternoon Sam with his classmate in the school playing basketball ,from four PM till six PM.At after drinner,Sam with father go for a walk,fathe bought him a classical CD.the day Sam with is fun.