句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;没有能够有效地使用连接词和过渡词。
Sam got up six o'clock yesterday morning.Then go to the park by bike,have funning in the park.At noon and parents to eat lunch at McDonald's.In the afternoon Sam with his classmate in the school playing basketball ,from four PM till six PM.At after dinner,Sam with father for a walk,father bought him a classical CD.The day Sam with is fun.